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ПисанеЗаглавие: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyСъб 02 Окт 2010, 22:58

I can't understand the people in our world.By "Our World" I mean the world we are living right in this moment, they think just about so limited things that they won't even remember in a few years.Why does everybody look the interlocutor with a sight of anger and disharmony that has no sense.I can't understand the people perhaps im diffrent, may be they are diffrent, maybe the world's gone crazy, but a lot of people would say" this is some teenager's lame stuff about love and good time or just a painful life that they are having.." Its not like this at least nobody would like to say it like this. I don't know if im saying it like this but i'll try to be clear and concise.What im trying to say is that everybody lives in there own world, and almost the entire generation considers it as a bad thing that is just another "EMO" story.Its not like that everybody must have there private space from time to time, is it so hard not to express an opinion about the people we see on the street, on the bus and in school or work?Why does the humanity have to be so cruel with people who are considered as the word "Weak" why does the generation of human kind must be so bad with people that don't have the origin that they are suppose to have in our world?People that aren't wearing the fancy cloths?People that don't have the chance to afford a cool car and show off infront of there friends?I can't find an answer to all theese questions but at least for now im doing my best and trying to be a better person.Begining with good treathing of people and have the required tolerance to them.No one wanted to born a cripple or a orphan, no one wanted to be treated because of his racial traits. No one wanted to be sued for the mistakes of the other, but people make this compromise to people that treat them awful because of there physical abilities, because of there appearance.Till now i can't do anything about it,nobody can't do anything, just try being a honorable person after reading this, try to be honest with your relatives and friends.

Не съм го редактирал, просто реших да пиша и писах, не съм в състояние да го редактирам, прекалено съм изморен, ако утре ми е до редакция може и да го по-оправя малко.
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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyНед 03 Окт 2010, 17:11

Идеята е добра, НО:

- Имам чувството, че засегна 39864827364 теми в 20 реда текст.
- Изреченията са прекалено дълги, аз лично не мога да видя къде свършва едно и започва друго.
- Ако това е есе, то не е структурирано както трябва (Въведение, теза, антитеза, обобщение..)

Ако се поработи малко повече върху това, което си написал, може да излезе нещо много добро.
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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyНед 03 Окт 2010, 23:53

Мне, всъщност това не е нищо, това е просто някакъв монолог, който водя със себе си.Точно това е идеята, да има много теми, които засягат всички и всеки да открие нещо, което го вълнува.
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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyПон 04 Окт 2010, 23:38

Да, но многото теми да са отделени по някакъв начин. (Това е моето мнение. Според мен са прекалено преплетени всички теми и ми е трудно да ги разгранича. Ако бяха малко по-подредени щеше да ми е по-лесно.)
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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyВто 05 Окт 2010, 01:21

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Това е лично творчество и не мисля, че е уместна критиката ти, Ем, понеже нали именно това е творчеството - полет на мисълта извън реалността, описвайки я същевременно. Но всъщност, не - може да се критикува формата, може да се критикува съдържанието... всичко може да се критикува, но нека не забравяме, че "всяка критика - и най-възвеличаващата, и най-съсипващата, е вид автобиография". Казваш: "Имам чувството, че засегна 39864827364 теми в 20 реда текст." Е, какво му е лошото на това? Или предпочиташ 39864827364 реда без тема? Защо, вместо да критикуваш, че в малкото е събрано много, не доразвиеш всичките тези 39864827364 теми, които си забелязала в 20-те реда? Не е нужно да казвам, че е много по-лесно да драснеш 2 -3 реда критика, отколкото да размишляваш над всичко, което си забелязала, нали?
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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyВто 05 Окт 2010, 02:16

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I can't understand the people in our world.By "Our World" I mean the world we are living right in this moment, they think just about so limited things that they won't even remember in a few years.

I can't understand them either. People are just much more complicated than they seem. Nowadays, people are superficial. The care only for their own good. It's all about money and fame. They don't care about their relationships with their family, with their friends.. Some of them don't even have friends.

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Why does everybody look the interlocutor with a sight of anger and disharmony that has no sense.

That is maybe because most of the people in our society don't care how they treat each other. They get easily angry because of the negative energy they keep in themselves. People don't share their feelings with their relatives. That may be the source of all the anger and bitterness.

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I can't understand the people perhaps im diffrent, may be they are diffrent, maybe the world's gone crazy, but a lot of people would say" this is some teenager's lame stuff about love and good time or just a painful life that they are having.."

You've got a point. people are different. There are not even two people in the world who are just exactly the same. Another thing is that people change. Sometimes they become better humans, sometimes worse. It's inevitable.
Yeah, the world's gone crazy, once more you've got a point.
In my opinion any mature adult who would say something like this "this is some teenager's lame stuff about love and good time or just a painful life that they are having.." just..hadn't had childhood, hadn't been a teenager.
For adults, teenager's problems may seem very simple..but we're having some tough times sometimes.


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Its not like this at least nobody would like to say it like this. I don't know if im saying it like this but i'll try to be clear and concise.

I cannot quite grasp the meaning of this sentence, so I won't comment anything.

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What im trying to say is that everybody lives in there own world, and almost the entire generation considers it as a bad thing that is just another "EMO" story.Its not like that everybody must have there private space from time to time,

I can't understand what this EMO thing has to do with the things written above.
Do you mean that when someone's trying to have some private space around them, society considers them EMOs?


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is it so hard not to express an opinion about the people we see on the street, on the bus and in school or work?

That's another sentence i don't get.

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Why does the humanity have to be so cruel with people who are considered as the word "Weak"

In my opinion, humans have some need to be OVER something or somebody. When they see someone weak and indrawn they see an opportunity to be OVER him. They are bad and cruel with him/her.

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why does the generation of human kind must be so bad with people that don't have the origin that they are suppose to have in our world?People that aren't wearing the fancy cloths?People that don't have the chance to afford a cool car and show off infront of there friends?I can't find an answer to all theese questions but at least for now im doing my best and trying to be a better person.

As i said before, people need to be OVER. When someone's rich, he or she gets high in society and is given fame. They become selfish because of the money. Money is something very cruel. When you are rich, you have confidence and mistreat these who are not in your class.


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No one wanted to born a cripple or a orphan, no one wanted to be treated because of his racial traits. No one wanted to be sued for the mistakes of the other, but people make this compromise to people that treat them awful because of there physical abilities, because of there appearance.

No one wanted, but that happens. And is called racism (talking about racial traits).
Life is unfair and that's it.


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Till now i can't do anything about it,nobody can't do anything, just try being a honorable person after reading this, try to be honest with your relatives and friends.

No, there is. We all can do something about it. As you said, we have to try to be honorable. We mustn't forget that before all, we are human beings.
Be good.


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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyПет 08 Окт 2010, 16:17

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Till now i can't do anything about it,nobody can't do anything, just try being a honorable person after reading this, try to be honest with your relatives and friends.


No, there is. We all can do something about it. As you said, we have to try to be honorable. We mustn't forget that before all, we are human beings.
Be good.

What happens if everybody say "I can't do anything about it"?
Hey, people, Neo won't jump out of the "Matrix"! "The One" does NOT exist.
If humanity wants to change the world and make it a better place, then THE HUMANS are supposed to be the one to do something about it.
In order to make the world a better place first we should change ourselves. Every living creature has the strenght to become good. We should turn sight to our souls and hearts. The answer is there.
My mom says "Бъди промяната, която искаш да настъпи". I'll translate it for you: "Be the difference you wanna make".

In two words - the wolrd will change, when people change.

So. If you want to see "shiny happy people" around you - turn yourself into "shiny happy person". With time - I hope - another humans would understand this. All we need to do is be happy and LOVE. Love ourselves, our family, friends. Love the sky and the sun. Love those who harm us.
Because in the end everything that matters is people's pure and loving hearts.

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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyНед 24 Окт 2010, 10:22

Не съм от хората, които биха започнали да крещят "ОМФГ, ПИШИ НА РОДНИЯ СИ ЕЗИК!!1!!", обаче когато почти не владееш английския, просто няма смисъл да се мъчиш. Разбирам да ползваш английския за поезия, или ако си го писал, специално за място, където се изисква да е на английски, но тогава се очаква поне да поработиш върху грешките си. Накратко - научи английски като хората, а дотогава пиши на български, понеже повече го чаткаш.
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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyНед 24 Окт 2010, 11:07

И това, което си написал горе, абсолютно утвърждава теорията на Джошката за грубостта и злобеенето на хората. ^^
Но пък, хей, и аз не съм от онези, които ще ти кажат "вземете се скрийте с безкрайните си критики и нежелани съвети!"
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ПисанеЗаглавие: Re: For the good of humanity   For the good of humanity EmptyНед 24 Окт 2010, 22:28

Брат, ти имаш проблеми със зрението.Не опита ли въобще да прочетеш това, което казваш, че е на "РОДНИЯ ЕЗИК", който и ти чаткаш повече, че има доста грешки, но ще видя, кога ще съм в състояние да ги оправя, защото нямам време и не съм доста добре физически.
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You seem to have misunderstood what I said. So now I'll make it clear, but this time in English, because that seems to be the language, everyone in the thread keeps speaking, for some obscure reasons. Your thoughts flow much better in your native language than in a language that you seem to be far from fluent in. So writing in your native language will not only lead to less mistakes, but it will lead to better writing.
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I don't god damn care about the quality of my writing. Im writing because I want 2.
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